Title of article :
THREE TYPES OF COMMENTS ON CONTENT: TEACHER VS. PEER FEEDBACK
Author/Authors :
Tajik، Leila نويسنده , , Fakhari، Maryam نويسنده , , Hashamdar، Maryam نويسنده , , Habib Zadeh، Somayeh نويسنده ,
Issue Information :
فصلنامه با شماره پیاپی 81 سال 2016
Abstract :
This study was conducted to examine the effect of three types of
comments, i.e. imperatives, questions, and statements, with different
communicative purposes, i.e. giving information and making a
request, given by an ELT teacher and peers on students’ revision of
their writings. Sixty-four female students, between 16 and 26 years
old studying at high-intermediate level of English language
proficiency in Iran Language Institute (ILI) participated in this
quasi-experimental study. They constituted four intact classes, two of
which received feedback on their writing from their teacher, and the
other two received peer feedback. One hundred and twenty eight
pairs of students’ drafts including 672 instances of revisions of their
writings based on teacher or peer comments were collected and
analyzed based on the rubric designed by Ferris (1997). It was found
that questions and statements provided by the teacher with the
purpose of making a request, and statements given by the peers with
either one of communicative functions all bring about the best results
in students’ writings. On the other hand, the analysis of the revisions
made by the students showed that statements provided by the teacher
for the purpose of giving information has the least positive effect on
the students’ modifications. Surprisingly, questions provided by the
teacher and peers with the purpose of giving information were found
to have negative effects on the students’ writing.
Keywords :
communicative purpose , Peer feedback , Teacher Feedback , content , comment type
Journal title :
Journal of Teaching Language Skills(JTLS)
Journal title :
Journal of Teaching Language Skills(JTLS)