Abstract :
Although the role of social interaction through conversational activities iswell established in the L2 writing classroom in relation to
idea development, understanding rhetorical modes, the creation of a sense of audience, aswell as the promotion of feedback, relatively
little attention has been given to the actual discourse of teachers and learners, particularly in face-to-facewriting conferences. Previous
investigations of teacher talk in L2 conferences suggest that when there is more talk around revision in the conference, the revisions are
more successful. However, these studies have employed different frameworks for analysis, investigated mostly high-proficiency
learners, and have not systematically compared the relationship of the topics addressed in the conferences to the nature of the discourse.
In contrast, this study employs two frameworks for analysis, negotiation and scaffolding, to investigate the discursive quality of two
teachers, whosewriting conferenceswith prematriculated ESL learners attended to very different writing concerns.Neither framework
alone captured the differences between the teachers’ conferences, but together patterns of difference were evident. Certain
combinations of negotiation and scaffolding moves in relation to conference focus allowed one teacher to vary assistance in relation
to the proficiency of the learners and promote greater learner participation in the review of their writing.
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Keywords :
Scaffolding , discourse , Negotiation , Conferences , L2 , Writing